The Mistake Chapter 14
Remember the hint I gave earlier about Jarrod regretting his words well... Chapter Fourteen - The Scholars Club "Eugene I'd like a word with you," Jarrod informed his brother quietly as the family...
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I'm glad that Jarrod and Gene have worked through this problem. I think they both have a better understanding of the other. Hurry back Curly Laura !!! Laura
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Wonderful, dynamic chapter. You took us through everything. Calmness, pensive, unknowing, rage, fury, understanding, calmness, and friendship again. Wow.
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Whew! Glad THAT talk is over with. Bout time the two of them made up. Now onward to the healing of family. HUGS! Patti
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Glad that Jarrod and Gene had it out and were able to come out on the right side of things. Shows how close they are as brothers! Now lets see where they go from here...
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I loved this exchange between Gene & Jarrod. It felt real, and happily they came to terms.
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That was an electrifying scene between the two brothers. I thought you characterized them both extremely well. You conveyed to us the depth of Gene's distress and heartache about Connie and Jarrod...
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Things had to come to a head and erupt before settling down. Great writing!
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very, very nice--I love Jarrod's self-awareness--and the fact that he has shared it with Eugene, who now understands him better as well--I love that they have a bond because they both love women who...
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